Cinematography video feedback/learner response

1)




2)

• Some brilliant shots and camera movement - a very impressive response to the brief. Absolutely engaging and I thought the pace generally worked well.
• Too many long shots but some good pan movements and the final over the shoulder focus pull was almost excellent (focus just out - an EBI for the OTS and CUs).
• Music was good but needed SFX for the fight.

3)

WWW:

• Fun and entertaining storyline.
• Tight framing.
•  Phenomenal editing.
• Good music choice.
• Clear shots + quality.
• Great action. 
• Added labels.

EBI:

• Too sped up at times.
• Went over a minute.
• Too many long shots.

4)

WWW:

• The panning shots I think were done very well and effective.
• I think the music I cut and put together fitted with the action.
• The narrative was good and interesting.

EBI:

• Add in some SFX when the fight was going on.
• Add in a few other shots.
• I could cut some parts out so it isn't that much over 1 minute.