2)
- Some brilliant shots and camera movement - a very impressive response to the brief. Absolutely engaging and I thought the pace generally worked well.
- Too many long shots but some good pan movements and the final over the shoulder focus pull was almost excellent (focus just out - an EBI for the OTS and CUs).
- Music was good but needed SFX for the fight.
3)
- Fun and entertaining storyline.
- Tight framing.
- Phenomenal editing.
- Good music choice.
- Clear shots + quality.
- Great action.
- Added labels.
- Too sped up at times.
- Went over a minute.
- Too many long shots.
4)
WWW:
- The panning shots I think were done very well and effective.
- I think the music I cut and put together fitted with the action.
- The narrative was good and interesting.
EBI:
- Add in some SFX when the fight was going on.
- Add in a few other shots.
- I could cut some parts out so it isn't that much over 1 minute.
